Black_Cat XIII review on “Welcome to Macintosh”
The blog had a lot of information, but it wasn’t really in order. She should’ve put the history first because having it last doesn’t really make it a clear conclusion. Overall, the review was well written. Her opinion was clear but short; she should’ve elaborated more and explained what she learned.
Bignsmalls INC review on “Welcome to Macintosh”
Very informative and it was really organized. The whole review flowed together very well, following the format of a good review. “I believe that without this documentary many people would not have understood the full meaning of how difficult it was to develop these computers…” I really like that opinion because a lot of people can agree with that. I enjoyed reading this review and I am looking forward to reading other reviews from them.
Wasians Review review on “Dr. Horrible’s sing a long blog”
I like how they gave a little description about what the movie was about. Although, I think they should’ve fixed it up a bit to where the spoiler is at the end. Also, the last paragraph should’ve gone before the description about the movie because after they talk about the movie they talk about their opinion again. But it was a really good review and I look forward to their future reviews also.
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